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Sitting out cold in the rain
Contemplating more pain to gain
Knife in hand, draw across the wrist
Exhume my soul as I make your fist
Break your kiss, fake this, wistfully
No time for bliss
Keep it all inside to stay on the outside
Running from something that you couldn't hide behind
Stillborn soul flying free through nothingness
Life lies waiting for another chance to depress [repress]
No time for choices, no chance to second guess
A thought flash before my mind's eye
Staring blank up at the sky
Down on my back, still wonder why
At the end everything just wants to die
No more solace for the tears we cry
©2003-2009 ~fallenaskari
:iconfallenaskari:

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its all just so much shit anyway...


maybe im just lost..

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:iconsoulwrai:
very well done clear, just well written

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my other account [link]

teehee! :boogie: energy drinks will make life fun!
:iconsaro-n-mizary:
"No more solace for the tears we cry "

very direct
you use extremely strong wording
good job

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I have no more cute things to say, this is just me stripped
:iconsoulharvester:
+fav........... good... best one i've seen from you in a while....

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outdated... overrated...
:iconamimylife:
Nice piece of my life you've managed to put here. I can imagine somebody(or is it myself?) sitting on the sidewalk, nothing and nobody around, except for the lies. Oh the lies! And the pain inside, a shiver crosses my spine, I sigh. What happened to the joyfull time? I die a little more if I see him smile.
You got talent for writing. Keep it up.

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He holds the key to my Pandora's Box
Shamefull as it is
He left me unlocked...

Nothing can be done to fight this sadistic abuse of time
Trust me, I've tried...

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